Editorial: The main contention of Kramer’s book is that coal companies are to blame for our region’s economic difficulties.
Conclusion (thus)
The book’s main contention is simply false. rephrase: Coal companies are not to blame for our region’s economic difficulties.
Evidence
Kramer based this contention on allegations that the companies made no significant investments in other industries in our region, but the companies did make significant investments (albeit sometimes indirectly) in road building and manufacturing in the region.
Evaluate
Whenever we’re doing Flaw and the argument is a Rebuttal we want to immediately look out for the two rebuttal flaws from the 10 famous flaws:
1. Ad Hominem, in which the author dismisses someone’s point of view because the person has a biased interest in the matter or because they have conflicting past behavior.
2. Unproven vs. Proven False, in which the author says that
This argument seems to be committing #2, since the conclusion is saying “this view is false”. Kramer based his conclusion on idea Y, and the author tells us that idea Y is false.
Just because we base a conclusion on a wrong idea doesn’t mean that the conclusion is wrong. In the old days, people concluded that humans were special based on the belief that Earth was the center of the universe. Now that we know that Earth is not the center of the universe, does that prove that humans aren’t special? Of course not. Maybe we are special, but just for a different reason (like maybe we’re the most intelligent species so far).
Goal
Let’s look for an answer calling out the Unproven vs. Proven False flaw. Just because the evidence of Kramer’s argument turns out to be false doesn’t prove that Kramer’s conclusion is false.