Last year the Lalolah River was ranked by the Sunvale Water Commission as the most polluted of the fifteen rivers in the Sunvale Water District.
Conclusion (must be = causal speculation)
Measures taken to clean up the river must be working.
Evidence (since)
This year the Lalolah River is ranked as only the 3rd most polluted river in the district.
Last year it was ranked #1.
Evaluate
This argument has a common structure. The evidence is an Asymmetric Comparison (it used to be ranked 1st most polluted, but now it's ranked 3rd most polluted).
And the author's conclusion states or assumes a causal explanation for that Curious Fact, that asymmetric comparison.
Curious Fact .... Why did the river go from being the most polluted to the 3rd most polluted?
Author's Explanation .... they took some measures to clean up the river, and so now the river is less polluted than before.
The two pressure points for these arguments are always the same: 1. Alternate Explanations for the curious fact 2. the plausibility of the author's explanation
On Flaw, we're primarily concerned with the #1. They want us to see that the author is overconfidently jumping to one possible causal explanation while failing to consider that there could be other explanations.
What could be an alternate explanation for why the Lalolah River went from being the most polluted to the 3rd most polluted?
Maybe that river didn't get any cleaner, but the two rivers that are now ranked higher than Lalolah got worse.
It's possible for Elon Musk to go from being the richest person in the world to the 3rd richest without him losing any money. It could be explained by people who previously had less money than him gaining enough money to surpass him.
Goal
Let's look for something like,