For several years the Technology Institute has used a new experimental curriculum in its plumbing program.
Conclusion (this shows that)
The new curriculum has lowered the quality of plumbing instruction.
Evidence
A survey last year found that only 1/3 of the graduates were able to pass the plumber's certification test (which is well below the national average).
Evaluate
We can't really judge the author's Comparative conclusion, which claims that the plumbing instruction is now worse quality than it was before, thanks to the new curriculum.
In order to compare whether the quality has changed / lowered, we would need some data point from before / after.
This argument only provides the "after" data point. With the new curriculum in place, only 33% of graduates pass the certification test. What was that percentage "before" the new curriculum was installed?
If we the grads from this program used to have a 25% passing rate and now have a 33% passing rate, then we'd think the new curriculum is improving the quality.
The argument tries to compare the 33% rate of Tech Institute's grads to the national average, but that has nothing to with assessing whether T.I. currently is better than T.I. was with the old curriculum.
Finally, we have a language shift from "what % of grads pass this test" to "what the quality of plumbing instruction" is. Do we really know that this certification test is a good metric of the quality of plumbing instruction? Maybe it's a stupid test, and quality of plumbing instruction should be judged more by how well these plumbers perform out on the job.
Goal
Look for an answer complaining about our Incomplete Comparison: is a 33% pass rate better / worse than the pass rate we had with the old curriculum?
Or look for an answer talking about the dubious idea that this certification test stands as an adequate measurement of what quality of instruction T.I. provides.