Statistics show clearly that in those countries with the most severe penalties for driving while intoxicated, a smaller percentage of drivers have traffic accidents involving alcohol use than in other countries.
Conclusion
This refutes those who claim that would-be drunk drivers will not be deterred by the prospect of severe penalties.
rephrase: Would-be drunk drivers will be deterred by the prospect of severe penalties.
Evidence
In countries with the most severe penalties for drunk driving, a smaller percentage of drivers have traffic accidents involving alcohol.
Evaluate
Any time the evidence includes a statistic, study, artifact, or experiment, it's likely that the author's conclusion will announce or assume some causal interpretation of that evidence. We use our Explain Curious Fact mindset for these.
Curious Fact .... why is there a correlation between countries with severe penalties for drunk driving and lower % of drivers having traffic accidents involving alcohol?
Author's Explanation ... the harsh penalties scare citizens out of drunk driving.
As always, we consider the two pressure points of such an argument: 1. Alternate Explanations for the curious fact 2. the plausibility of the author's explanation
Whenever the author presents a correlation between X and Y and concludes/assumes that X causes Y, we reflexively consider two possible alternate explanations: - Reverse Cause (maybe Y causes X) - 3rd Factor (maybe X and Y are both connected to some other factor Z)
Here, it doesn't make much sense to say that . So, if we're going to weaken via Alternate Explanation, it will probably be a 3rd factor. For example, maybe the countries with the most severe penalties for drunk driving also happen to have cities that are more walkable / public transportation that is more usable.
We could say,
Goal
It's more common to weaken with an Alternate Explanation, so we'll primarily look for that, but we might otherwise see a correct answer that hurts the plausibility of the idea that (f.e. maybe citizens have no idea what the penalties are for drunk driving).