Employee: My boss says that my presentation to our accounting team should have included more detail about profit projections.
Conclusion (so / clearly)
My boss is incorrect.
rephrase: My presentation to the accounting team should not have included more detail about profit projections.
Evidence
People's attention tends to wander when they are presented with too much detail.
Evaluate
Given that ... people's attention tends to wander when they're presented with too much detail,
How could we still argue that .... the presentation should have included more detail about profit projections?
Maybe the presentation included no details! We're only worried about people's attention wandering when we present too much detail, but there might be a happy middle ground. Maybe the employee provided too little detail, and providing "more detail" wouldn't immediately take the presentation into the realm of having "too much" detail. It would just move it into the realm of having .
Goal
Look for an answer saying,