Tissue biopsies taken on patients who have undergone throat surgery show that those who snored frequently were significantly more likely to have serious abnormalities in their throat muscles than those who snored rarely or not at all.
Conclusion
Snoring can damage the snorer's throat
Evidence
Patients who snored frequently were more likely to have serious throat muscle abnormalities than those who didn't snore as much.
Evaluation
This argument highlights the classic Correlation to Causality move. The author takes a Curious Fact: why is there a correlation between snoring and throat abnormalities? and assumes a Causal Explanation that one side of the correlation causes the other: snoring causes the throat abnormalities.
We always deal with causal arguments by asking ourselves: - How else could we explain this curious fact? - How could we better assess the plausibility of the author's hypothesis?
Goal
Since we're strengthening, we either need to Rule Out a different way to explain the Curious Fact (e.g. / ) or to boost the plausibility of the author's hypothesis (e.g. / )