There are circumstances in which it is not immoral to make certain threats, and there are circumstances in which it is not immoral to ask for money or some other favor.
Conclusion
There are times when it isn't immoral to ask for money/favor while making a threat.
Evidence
There are times when it isn't immoral to make a threat, and there are times when it isn't immoral to ask for money/favor.
Evaluation
This author has apparently never read Test 63's comparative passage about blackmail. It's all about the paradox of how these two actions which can separately be legal all of a sudden become illegal when you combine them.
Threatening someone for money/favors is extortion / blackmail, which we could potentially argue is always immoral. How did we get to this flawed conclusion?
Premise 1: Sometimes action A is X. Premise 2: Sometimes action B is X. Conclusion: So, sometimes doing action A and B together is X.
Goal
Let's find an argument that uses the same trait (e.g. "not immoral") three times, once with one thing, once with a second thing, and then a conclusion that combines those two things with that same trait.