The university's purchasing department is highly efficient overall.
Conclusion
Each staff member on purchasing department is efficient.
Evidence
The purchasing department overall is efficient.
Evaluation
This is a Part vs. Whole flaw, which we can recognize when the evidence and conclusion are recycling the same trait: “efficient”. Because the whole department deserves that label, does that mean that each employee deserves that label? Definitely not. When I was in 4th grade, I was on a really good soccer team. But does that mean that I was really good at soccer? No, I was terrible. My other teammates were so good that they made up for my lack of abilities.
Goal
We need something that recreates the move of