As part of a survey, approximately 10,000 randomly selected individuals were telephoned and asked a number of questions about their income and savings.
Conclusion (clearly / this demonstrates)
In general, people are more willing when they are younger than when they are older to reveal personal financial information to strangers over the telephone.
Evidence
10,000 people were randomly surveyed over the phone about their income and savings.
The older the person being queried, the more likely it was that they would refuse to answer any questions.
Evaluate
Because the conclusion is trying to explain the curious results of a survey, we can use our Explain Curious Fact mindset:
Curious Fact ... why, in this survey, were the younger people more willing to divulge information about their income and savings?
Author's Explanation ... when you're young, you're more willing to divulge that stuff to strangers than when you're old.
We're supposed to now consider 1. Alternate Explanations for the curious fact 2. how plausible is the Author's Explanation
How else could we explain why the younger people were more willing to talk about their financials? Maybe the causal factor isn't really about age, it's about wealth. Wealthier people are less willing to talk about their money and older people are more likely to have wealth.
Or Maybe the causal factor isn't really about age, it's about whether you use Venmo. People who, by using Venmo, get used used to making electronic transactions with witty memo comments that are publicly viewable become less bashful about revealing their financial info. Since younger people are more likely to use Venmo than older people, we get the survey results we got where youth and willingness to divulge are correlated, but it's Venmo not age that is the causal factor.
How would we test the plausibility of the author's hypothesis, that a young version of you was more willing to divulge financial information than an old version of you? We could ask older people whether they were more willing to talk about money when they were young.
Goal
Look for an answer that suggests an Alternate Explanation for the study (or one that attacks the plausibility of the idea that people get less willing to reveal financial information the older they get).