The National Association of Fire Fighters says that 45 percent of homes now have smoke detectors, whereas only 30 percent of homes had them 10 years ago.
Conclusion
Early detection of house fires is no more likely than it was 10 years ago.
Evidence (because)
45 percent of homes now have smoke detectors, whereas only 30 percent did 10 years ago.
Over half of the domestic smoke detectors are either without batteries or inoperative for some reason.
Evaluate
The author is presenting a statistic that suggests more homes have smoke detectors now than they did ten years ago. This could indicate that early detection of house fires should be more likely. However, the author concludes that early detection is no more likely despite the increase in smoke detectors, because more than half of these smoke detectors are inoperative.
Well, wasn't that true 10 years ago too? If it's a general truth that half of all smoke detectors don't actually function, you'd still have more functioning smoke detectors nowadays. After all, half of 45% is bigger than half of 30%.
Goal
The author must be thinking that the "half of them are inoperative" is a RECENT problem, not an ongoing one. She must be Assuming a Difference. Because if it's always been the case that half of them are inoperative, then her conclusion would just be wrong. We WOULD be more likely to early-detect fires nowadays, because a higher percentage of homes have detectors.