Psychologists report that children in nine-month schools typically forget a significant amount of schooling during summer breaks.
Evidence
Psychologists report that children in nine-month schools typically forget a significant amount of schooling during summer breaks.
Conclusion (We should conclude)
The twelve-month schedule is to be preferred insofar as academic learning is concerned.
Intermediate Conclusion
[The twelve-month schedule with three month-long breaks] will insure that students will not forget their schooling during their breaks.
Evaluate
This argument compares one plan [12-month schedule] to another [9-month schedule] and states that the 12-month schedule is preferable. We should consider factors that might have been left out of this comparison.
For example, what if a longer, 12-month schedule with three month-long breaks will somehow make students even more forgetful?
The argument claims that the 12-month schedule "will insure" that students will not forget their schooling during breaks. But that's a prediction about the future. That's what makes it an intermediate conclusion, not just a premise. It's a claim that might or might not be true.
The conclusion is about "academic learning," not just remembering or forgetting. Could the 12-month plan have some unintended negative consequences that would make it worse for learning overall, even if it was better for retention?
Comparative arguments frequently overlook these types of potential objections. They’ll tell us that one of two options has a certain good quality. Based on that, they'll conclude that this option is better overall. It’s a classic example of an “incomplete comparison.”
Goal
A correct answer might describe an objection like the ones we've considered here, pointing out that the argument has "failed to consider" or "overlooked" this possible objection. Beware of answers that describe something which isn't actually happening in the argument, even if it seems related at first glance.