Should a journalist’s story begin with the set phrase “in a surprise development,” as routinely happens?
Conclusion (Implicit)
A journalist's story should not begin with the phrase "in a surprise development".
Evidence
If the surprise was merely the journalist's surprise, then the journalist shouldn't include the sentiment about the surprise because that's just intruding themselves into their stories, which journalists aren't supposed to do.
If the surprise is someone else's, then it should be specifically attributed to that person (not just said generically at the outset of the article).
And if the surprise is just "everyone's", then just get on with the breaking news. Sure, dramatic breaking news will be to everyone's surprise, so just tell us the news, rather than state the obvious preamble "in a surprise development".
Evaluate
This is a weird Main Conclusion question because the conclusion is the implied takeaway from the paragraph, rather than an explicit claim.
We know that on Main Conclusion, the main conclusion is usually found in the 1st sentence or found in some Pivot / Rebuttal claim.
The 1st sentence here is a rhetorical question, and it's an opinionated question, because it's about whether something should be done. Thus, if the author answers or implies an answer to this question, it will be conveying an author's opinion, which is what the main conclusion should be.
The 2nd and 3rd sentences lay out three different options that all lead to the same takeaway: it's dumb / silly to start the article with "in a surprise development".
By covering all possibilities and showing that it's never appropriate to start with "in a surprise development", the author is providing her implicit answer to the rhetorical question in the first sentence.
Her answer is an opinionated rebuttal: journalists shouldn't start their stories that way, even though they routinely do.
Goal
Let's look for something like .