Poor nutrition is at the root of the violent behavior of many young offenders.
Conclusion
Poor nutrition is at the root of the violent behavior of many young offenders.
Intermediate Conclusion
The results from this prison study confirm a link between poor nutrition and violent behavior.
Evidence
In one study of young offenders, the violent inmates consistently chose foods that were low in nutrients.
In another study, some violent inmates were switched onto a diet high in nutrients, and there was a steady improvement in their behavior over the four months of the experiment.
Evaluate
Since the argument is interpreting the causal meaning behind the results of a study, we should use our Explain Curious Fact framework.
Curious Fact ... Why is it that there was a steady improvement in the behavior of violent inmates during the four months after they were placed on a diet high in nutrients?
Author's Explanation ... Poor nutrition causes violent behavior, so once we improved their nutrition, the violent behavior started to go away.
We always evaluate these via two different lines of inquiry: 1. Could there be an Alternate Explanation for the curious fact? 2. How plausible is the Author's Interpretation?
Can we think of other reasons why the behavior would have improved among these violent inmates who were placed on the high nutrition diet?
Maybe it's a reverse causality sort of thing --- the people who are willing to be rehabilitated in prison are more likely to agree to be placed on a high nutrient diet in an experiment. Being placed on the experimental diet didn't cause their behavior to improve. Their willingness to improve is what led them to participate in the experiment.
Maybe it's just a case that four months in prison mellows you out. You came into prison a violent offender, but once you see how badly you get disciplined if you act out in prison, you start to fall in line (that would be classified as an "improvement in their behavior").
How plausible is the idea that poor nutrition leads to violent behavior? Is there any physiological explanation that could help us understand that causal mechanism (i.e. do nutrients give us the will power to resist doing bad things?) Are there any more data points that show good behavior correlated with good nutrition or bad behavior correlated with bad nutrition?
Goal
Since this is Strengthen, we're more likely to see an answer that boosts the plausibility of the Author's Explanation. The most common form of correct answer on Strengthen (for Explain Curious Fact arguments) is a No Cause, No Effect answer, like .
But a correct answer could also rule out an alternate explanation for why their behavior improved, like .