Essayist: Earth is a living organism, composed of other organisms much as animals are composed of cells, not merely a thing upon which creatures live.
Conclusion
Earth is a living organism, not merely a thing upon which creatures live.
Evidence (this is supported by the fact that)
Earth, like all organisms, can be said to have a metabolism and to regulate its temperature, humidity, and other characteristics, divorced from the influences of its surroundings.
Naturally, Earth does not literally breathe, but neither do insects (which have no lungs), and they still respire successfully.
Evaluate
Whenever we do Role and Main Conclusion, we remind ourselves that the conclusion will be the First Sentence or a Rebuttal about 90% of the time.
Here, the conclusion is the first sentence, signified by the transition into the 2nd sentence which cues us that what follows.
We're being asked about the claim that "insects do not literally breathe". That doesn't seem like a Premise supporting the idea that "Earth is a living organism", but it's not an Opposing idea either. Superficially, it seems irrelevant. Why was it talked about?
In the final sentence the author makes a concession, signified by concession wording: . Concessions are when the author acknowledges a potential objection someone might make to their reasoning.
Someone who doesn't think that Earth is a living organism might say,
The author would respond by saying,
Goal
Look for something in the realm of .