More women than men suffer from Alzheimer’s disease—a disease that is most commonly contracted by elderly persons.
Conclusion
This theory may be wrong. rephrase: The reason that women suffer more than men from Alzheimer's might not be because women live longer.
Evidence
A recent study shows that prescribing estrogen to post-menopausal women can prevent them from developing Alzheimer's. Meanwhile, men have a big supply of testosterone, which the body converts into estrogen.
Evaluate
Whenever we do Main Conclusion (and Role) we read the paragraph differently, knowing that 90% of the time the conclusion is the very first sentence, or it's some rebuttal signified with a pivot word (like "but, yet, however"). In either case, 90% of the time the conclusion is earlier than the support, on these two question types.
As we read this first sentence, we ask ourselves whether it's eligible to be a conclusion -- does it sound like an opinion coming from the author? No, it sounds like fact.
But the second sentence contains an attribution (literally). It says . When we see any attribution in the early going of a Main Conclusion paragraph, then we anticipate that our author will probably be rebutting this position.
Sure enough, the second half of the 2nd sentence has one of those signature pivot words that we're listening for on Main Conclusion (but, yet, however).
So now we think,
Does the author going to go on and try to convince us of that? Yes, because she builds up a case for an Alternate Explanation. This theory that "longer life span" is why women are more afflicted may be wrong, because the real reason that women are more afflicted could be that estrogen is the secret weapon against Alzheimer's and women have less estrogen than men in their old age.
Goal
The conclusion was "this theory may be wrong", but since this claim includes a pronoun (this theory), we need to make sure we insert the specific language that pronoun is referring to:
It may be wrong to think that longer life span is why women suffer more from Alzheimer's (lack of estrogen may be the real reason that women suffer more from Alzheimer's)