Novelists cannot become great as long as they remain in academia.
Conclusion
Novelists cannot become great as long as they remain in academia.
Evidence
Schools hone observation and analysis (useful to novelists). But an intuitive grasp of everyday emotions can only be obtained through immersion in everyday life, which being an academic precludes.
Evaluate
The argument moves from to "academics can't become great novelists." That step only works if the intuitive grasp of everyday emotions is something required for greatness. If it were merely nice to have, the argument would not establish that academics are barred from greatness.
Goal
The right answer should fill the gap by establishing that an intuitive grasp of everyday emotions is necessary for greatness. Negation test: if it's not necessary, the argument falls apart.